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Mark Sowers's avatar

This is solid advice. I'm in the midst of writing my own epic fantasy series, and while I don't read much fiction of any kind anymore, I still write it. One thing I've striven for, and in the interest of disclosure I'm 100% pantser, is realism. It surprises me to learn that there's not more of this in fantasy, and that some like to dismiss unrealism like you alluded to: "Lol, it's fantasy". That's a cop out, an excuse for a deus ex machina instead of a real solution. Maybe I should be glad I read mainly nonfiction now. At least it keeps me grounded in reality. Nice op-ed - I enjoyed it!

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Mary Catelli's avatar

The more realistic a fact is, the more your readers will expect it to be real. In the famous meme about the WWI T-rex, no one quibbles about the dinosaur. They object that the guns, the jeep, and the helmet prove it to be WWII.

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Allen Taylor's avatar

Wholeheartedly agree. Novels are not video games. If it doesn't make sense, readers will not come back for a second helping.

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K.M. Carroll's avatar

Oh gosh, yes to all of this. I think the videogame and anime culture has seriously damaged writers' ability to think in any kind of rational way. It's like Rule of Cool has been taken way too far. I picked up a mega-popular author's book, opened it up, and was treated to a cutscene from an early Assassin's Creed game, complete with wall-running and the little speed-streamers flowing off the dude. I read it incredulously. Next scene: Link the legendary warrior and his loyal fairy Navi are in a battle, with Navi swiping all the incoming arrows out of the way. I read this even more incredulously. A little later on, we have Halo Spartans fighting demons and jumping miles through the sky. I put the book down. If I want to read a videogame crossover like this, there's plenty of better ones on AO3.

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